
Press Releases - A Waste of Time ?
For 20 years before I became a
traffic builder for web sites, I was a publicist handling
household name consumer brands. I'm going to share a trade secret
with you: press releases are a colossal waste of time.
I haven't sent out a traditional
press release in the last 10 years. But I have placed stories
about my clients in The Wall St. Journal, New York Times, ABC
News, The Today Show, Good Morning America, and just about any
other major media outlet on the planet.
Editors surely don't need me or any
other publicist to write their stories. They need me to point them
in the direction of a good story, succinctly give them the facts
as I see them, the sources I know and then get out of the way so
they can write their own stories. I do those things by writing
pitch letters.
Here are some tips for writing
letters that get read:
SAY WHY YOU ARE WRITING
Begin with your reason for writing, e.g., "I am writing to
suggest a story about..." "I'd like to recommend an
interview with..." Too many times, the reason for the letter
is hidden several paragraphs into the letter. Editors are busy. If
you don't give them an immediate reason to keep reading, your
audience is over.
EXPLAIN YOUR PREMISE IN NO MORE
THAN TWO SENTENCES
Explain what makes your idea newsworthy. Why is this a good person
to interview or a good story to cover? Describe your idea's
relevance to current events... its connection to the beginning of
a trend... its likelihood to interest a broad cross section of the
audience.
How would you explain the story
pitch to your friend if you were in the elevator on the way out?
Would it take you a page and a half worth of words to make your
point? Not if you wanted your friend to keep listening. Be equally
kind to journalists.
EXPLAIN YOUR STORY IDEA IN ONE
OR TWO PARAGRAPHS
Explain how the story would work, what it involves, what role you
will play in assisting the reporter.
A journalist friend who told me he
gets a three foot stack of snail mail and over 150 emails a day
shared this story with me the other day. "Let me tell you
about a letter that typifies the ones we journalists never finish
reading. I got one the other day that started off by saying
"I've been on the Joe Franklin Show, this show, that show,
been talked about by so and so, I've also done this and
that." The next line was "I'm not a status oriented
person." There were about 8 more pages, but I didn't bother
to read them. I just laughed, showed the letter around and threw
it away."
TIMING CAN BE EVERYTHING
Timing is incredibly important. Your chances improve when you can
say "This is a hot topic and I have a great source."
Let's say you're an ophthalmologist and the President is going to
have eye surgery. You stand a good chance of getting a phone call
for your opinion if your email just arrived while the reporter is
thinking of whom to call. Your pitch only stands to become a story
if it is likely to make a lot of people stop and read or listen. I
think of it as the "Hey Martha" factor--editors look for
stories that make one say, "hey Martha, look at this!"
WATCH YOUR SUPERLATIVES
Don't make the company or person you are pitching sound hard to
believe. S/he probably didn't do whatever you're writing about
single-handedly. Describe her actual role. Be very careful with
hype words like "first, only, greatest, biggest."
Someone almost always did it before also, as well or as big.
Reporters are trained to look for conflict, lies, exaggerations.
LIST TOPICS THE PERSON CAN
ADDRESS
Give the top three or four areas of expertise your client can
address. Do it in bullet form.
GET IN ALL INTO 350 WORDS OR
LESS
Mark Twain said "If I had more time I would have written
less." Edit. Edit again. When you are done, edit again.
Here's another tip. Once you get a
reporter interested he will ask you for more information. And then
you can give him mountains of background you've researched.
Because another thing my reporter friend shared with me is this:
most reporters hate to do research.
If your letter is going via email,
include a URL where a company fact sheet, management bios,
relevant photos and other articles that have been written about
the company can be found. Reporters may deny this but I have found
that few of them want to be the first to write about a subject.
There's a definite pack mentality in play. Understanding it will
increase your placements.
Article by B.L.
Ochman
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